Nice to see you posting again man, great writing as always.
What was the joke? I mean the art was alright but this is listed under "comedy-parody" so I'd assume there'd be a joke. I don't get what was supposed to be funny about this or what it's even going for. I could give this a higher score even if the joke was some cringey joke like Mario eating mushrooms to get high or some gay shit like that, because even then I can tell what the joke is and what the cartoon is trying to go for, but as is I am lost as hell as far as the joke and overall point of this cartoon goes. From what I've seen of your art in general you have an interesting style at least, I'll give you that.
Are they twins? Why do they have the same body type and height? I'd recommend a complete redesign of the characters with varying body types or SOMETHING to differentiate them from each other. Also, I'd recommend studying anatomy and doing more standalone artwork, because there is no knowledge of anatomy or drawing in your work. You keep making the same mistakes and refuse to listen to feedback or even acknowledge. Advice, take it.
Very good stuff. The sketchy pencil style looked really cool, and the fluidity of the animation was very nice. I liked this sort of old cartoon silent narrative style, you nailed it completely. The music and sound suited it very well and was well done. It's just a very fun cartoon overall, good job.
Yooo you have gotten way fucking better. The animation was pretty solid, and I notice you are using a lot more frame by frame, good on ya. The sound design sort of irked me, I didn't really like the sound effects or anything all that much, if you were going for something cartoonish and sound driven I'd recommend more and crazier sound effects. I like the sort of thing you go for with the sound though, keep trying and I'm sure you'll nail it. I would recommend working on overall artwork a bit, just do standalone drawings and that kind of thing more. If you learn a few more fundamentals you'll learn how to more properly exaggerate characters and make them more cartoonish and fun. As is this cartoon seems a bit lacking as far as knowledge in drawing, and I know for me taking the time to focus purely on art doing drawings and sketches helps me a bunch. But overall you did a good job and you're clearly improving a shit ton, keep it up.
One of the few Mario cartoons on this site I don't immediately wanna shoot myself watching. Great animation, strong poses, good art, overall good stuff.
God damn it Ivan I wish I could animate like this, dope job man!!!
Please make more
Thanks for your review, we will defenitley make more animations. If you want you can check out our youtube channel where we have more animations.
I love Hellbenders!!!!!!!!!!
God damn dude you're one of the best porn animators I've seen in a while. The fluidity of the animation and drawings are always real nice in your stuff. Keep it up man.
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