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Well I'm not a fan of this meme at all but at least the visuals weren't the worst ever. I'm not a fan of these kind of really simplistic styles personally, I don't think they're lazy or anything I just don't really appreciate them visually, but that's not really something that can be objectively criticized. One thing that really bugged me was the use of tweening and skewing, I'm not a fan of that kind of animation personally. Overall this isn't really my thing at all but it's not the most poorly-made thing ever.

jessejayjones responds:

Thank you for the honest feedback! Yeah, this was done in a day just for fun. I love how much hate and love it's getting, hahaha. Thanks for checking it out! :)

This was very bad and you should feel bad! :(

I really loved this a lot. The animation was really nice, and the art style was enjoyable to look at. RyanStorm's color palette looked really nice. It was pretty funny too, very well written. Good job.

This was really good. I liked everything about this. The art style is kinda simple but very appealing looking. The animation was really nice. The story was interesting. I think this has plenty of potential for a sequel or even a series, because you have very effectively set up a foundation for that. You set up the whole thing with him becoming a fighter pretty well and set up his team too, there is a lot of potential for things that could happen in the future. There could also be some more development, more could be shown in regards to the world that has been set up, the characters can further develop. I feel like you did really good at making this both enjoyable on its own and being able to set up a potential series. I'd look forward to seeing what could happen with this in the future.

Kieran-s responds:

Thankya! Yeah I really enjoy using the structure of a series, but at the same time try to be open to it being a one off. Good point about the world building, I think that's something I struggle with. Glad you enjoyed!

Well shit I better donate all my money to him to fund his Minecraft and Sonic crossover series. This video truly enlightened me.

The animation was very good, I enjoyed this quite a bit.

That was beautiful.

Demos/tests are not allowed on NG.

I don't really like the fact that so many Pokemon Go cartoons are being made but I gotta say I really liked this one. I loved the animation and the art, and the colors were spectacular. I love the use of irony with the joke, it really worked very well.

PhantomArcade responds:

Happy this one stood out to ya dude, thanks for the review!

Not too bad for a first animation, it's sort of charmingly bad, I guess that's sort of what you were going for considering you made all the sound effects with your voice. One thing I really have to say is get a better microphone, because the audio quality was really not good. It's very Egoraptor-esque, which is kind of pleasant to me because I love his stuff. Particularly the shading style and the overall art style remind me of Ego's work. The visuals overall look kind of sloppy, especially with the coloring, so maybe make them a little more polished next time. But it's kind of a charming sloppiness I'll give you that. Also I found what was happening overall a bit hard to follow, so I'd recommend maybe making it more clear, I get the concept of "show don't tell" but the showing in my opinion needs to be done a bit better. I didn't really get the joke at all due to my difficulty following what was happening. But this looks to be your first ever cartoon, so for a first animation not bad, certainly a hell of a lot better than my (now deleted) first animation.

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