AtomicAstro's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Peanut Butter and Jelly sandwich]

I mean I saw no real reason why it had to be FNAF characters because they didn't really fit at all but the animation was alright at least.

storytellerYT responds:

Yeah, I just wanted it to be FNAF, no real reason, just out of preference.

[Perverted Toads]

I loved the animation, it was very smooth and appealing to look at.

Carbonwater responds:

I certainly do like that smoothness!

[Mario Animation Test]

My god, this was incredible. This is your magnum opus, its intelligence is really admirable, it questions the duality of both Mario and koopas alike. You are truly godlike, this deserves a Newgrounds banner.

[Akko's trip: Little Witch Academia Parody]

It wasn't too bad. The artwork looked really good, the colors are your best yet. My issues are the other aspects of the cartoon. First off, the animation. You're getting better but certain aspects kind of irk me. The biggest problem in this cartoon was the motion. There really wasn't much motion at all, and when there was, it didn't look too good. Certain instances looked very stiff, for example, the movement after Akko finishes saying she needed something for the test with her arm. The movements still primarily consist of bounce effects and tweening. I don't have a problem with tweening in itself and for the most part it looked fine, there was one particular instance that looked awful however. When Sucy said "Try this" the tween looked to be completely devoid of easing, and it looked horribly stiff. I'd recommend just trying a bit more frame by frame, and also I noticed that plenty of the facial expression transitions looked too quick, so not enough inbetweens is also still an issue I see. There were plenty of instances in which there should have been more motion but the characters just kind of stood there, so I'd recommend trying to put more motion into the characters. But, that said, your animation has been getting progressively better as you go on, with each cartoon the problems with your animation irk me less and less due to your improvement. The most well animated part of this had to be Moha's trip sequence, it's easily the highlight of this cartoon. Writing-wise, it was okay. The only part I legitimately laughed at was the part where the teacher cried like a baby. Everything else in regards to the writing was fine but nothing special. I didn't really laugh at the joke with the drug trip (if it was supposed to be a joke) because it was incredibly predictable, but humor is subjective so as long as you found the joke funny that's all that matters in the end right? And one thing that's very minor that I just kinda found weird... what's with Luluco popping in and out during the part where they get thrown in jail? It just kinda distracted me from the scene and wasn't really necessary, but I dunno maybe that was some joke that went over my head.

alicemargiela responds:

I read your review and in some parts, you are 100% correct! I should add more animation but since i wanted to improve drawing as whole, that distracted me. LOL But yeah, i do enjoy rigged animation like Red Minus does. I just have to learn and take your review into consideration into next cartoons which is what i will do. However, the Luluco part was an inside joke. If you watch the show, she is a space cop who arrests people, so i thought it be cute to add Luluco into the scene as a kind of joke to people who watch Space Patrol Luluco. But yes, i read your review and i will learn to animate more frame br frame and how to tween correctly. Thanks! ^^

[Candy Store]

The art and whatnot looks promising I'll give you that but you're not supposed to put previews onto Newgrounds.

goretoons responds:

Yes, thank you. I'm sorry I'm still new to Newgrounds, forgive me friend.

[UNDERTALE: Last fight]

Well the art and animation were pretty good. I particularly liked the sort of slight blending you put with certain shading/lighting effects. I liked the art style. But it felt like there was no real point to it. It's just the girl approaching Sans and then she just dies. That's it. I mean there was nothing really interesting within this cartoon. You could have at least had a fight ensue, then she gets killed. I'll give you 2 stars for the good artwork.

[Inspired]

Just realized I forgot to review this, this is amazing. I remember seeing the black and white version of this a while back, and it's great to see it in color now. This really feels like it was made with a lot of heart and passion behind it.

[Fay - LOVE DAY (Unfinished)]

Regardless of the cartoon itself, you're not supposed to upload incomplete work onto NG.

willcamick responds:

o_O Why dont you go tell Miss Finster on me there Randall. What did Papa Smurf say? Shut up I do what I want and if you dont like it you can go suck a lemon.

But all jokes aside shut up. People like you are why I stopped posting my work to NG in the first place. You make a few shit animations and think your king of the shit stains. (Your animations are good im just mad) So ................................................................ suck it.

[Pokémon to Go]

I mean I feel like Pokemon-related observations have been done to death, that wouldn't matter so much if it was done in an interesting way, but it wasn't. I've heard the same observations/remarks made in regards to Pokemon Go a million times already. It's just worn out at this point. And now the art/animation... it's probably a good idea to look up some tutorials on animating/drawing, because pretty much all the animation looks to have no knowledge in regards to how to animate, and all of the art looked either traced or terrible.

[Robot Boy Show - 8/24/16]

Robot Boy is back!

robot-jones responds:

better than ever !