AtomicAstro's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ghost Squad]

This was really good. I liked everything about this. The art style is kinda simple but very appealing looking. The animation was really nice. The story was interesting. I think this has plenty of potential for a sequel or even a series, because you have very effectively set up a foundation for that. You set up the whole thing with him becoming a fighter pretty well and set up his team too, there is a lot of potential for things that could happen in the future. There could also be some more development, more could be shown in regards to the world that has been set up, the characters can further develop. I feel like you did really good at making this both enjoyable on its own and being able to set up a potential series. I'd look forward to seeing what could happen with this in the future.

Kieran-s responds:

Thankya! Yeah I really enjoy using the structure of a series, but at the same time try to be open to it being a one off. Good point about the world building, I think that's something I struggle with. Glad you enjoyed!

[Pokemon Go Make Friends]

I don't really like the fact that so many Pokemon Go cartoons are being made but I gotta say I really liked this one. I loved the animation and the art, and the colors were spectacular. I love the use of irony with the joke, it really worked very well.

PhantomArcade responds:

Happy this one stood out to ya dude, thanks for the review!

[Peanut Butter and Jelly sandwich]

I mean I saw no real reason why it had to be FNAF characters because they didn't really fit at all but the animation was alright at least.

storytellerYT responds:

Yeah, I just wanted it to be FNAF, no real reason, just out of preference.

[Perverted Toads]

I loved the animation, it was very smooth and appealing to look at.

Carbonwater responds:

I certainly do like that smoothness!

[Fay - LOVE DAY (Unfinished)]

Regardless of the cartoon itself, you're not supposed to upload incomplete work onto NG.

willcamick responds:

o_O Why dont you go tell Miss Finster on me there Randall. What did Papa Smurf say? Shut up I do what I want and if you dont like it you can go suck a lemon.

But all jokes aside shut up. People like you are why I stopped posting my work to NG in the first place. You make a few shit animations and think your king of the shit stains. (Your animations are good im just mad) So ................................................................ suck it.

[Robot Boy Show - 8/24/16]

Robot Boy is back!

robot-jones responds:

better than ever !

[We Hope To See You Again]

I mean the animation was okay I guess but it looked to be reliant on just moving the same drawing across the screen at times, never do that. If you're doing frame by frame then unless only one part of the character is moving or something then it's best you just redraw the whole character for every frame. I feel like all these kind of "Pokemon has stupid logic lol" jokes have been made a million times already. I feel like it would have been funnier if the part where Nurse Joy was creepy was possibly more over the top and less slow paced, and why did she suddenly have a man voice? It made no sense. If the voice was creepy then I guess it could have made sense but it wasn't. But I mean I guess it wasn't the worst thing ever.

TheIYouMe responds:

For the trainer character I never just moved the drawings across the screen, I redraw him every time he moved. With Nurse Joy, not as much, because she had very limited movements anyway.

I don't doubt that there have been a million similar type of jokes made, but that doesn't change that I felt like doing this one. I thought it would be a fun idea to do, so I did it. I don't really think too much about whether or not similar jokes have been made before, because everything has been done before anyway.

I guess that part could have been more over the top, not sure how though? I suppose it is kinda slow paced, but then again, it's like 6 seconds or something? I didn't specifically have a man's voice in mind, but I did want it to be very deep, as I thought that could be kinda creepy and out of nowhere (element of surprise, the unexpected and all that). What would be a way to make it creepier? I genuinely would like to know.

But thanks for saying the animation's okay, I know very well that I'm far from the best around, but I like doing these, and I think I'm getting decent at it.

[soundjam]

I mean the actual motion and artwork look pretty good, but it's so unfinished. I understand that you needed to cut corners in order to get it out on time but at least finish it and release it as something that isn't sound jam or just don't finish it but don't release it like this. It's a shame too, from what I see the animation is good so the final product would have kicked ass. 2 stars for the stuff that actually was done looking alright.

wappa responds:

I feel you, man. I sometimes wish that I had a hyperbolic time chamber or something so I could take my time for the sake of quality.